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The page with rules has kind of confusing formatting including not a clear heading(s) and not used  capital first letter at the beginnings of the beginning sentences. I learned the term "shocks" to be used in a journalism context. Wow.

I like the theme!:)

But there aree really serious flaws:

Jobs have no limits, so I could use my IRL job of being a Grandmaser (!) which would be geving me bonuses to all rolls. (I would be not abusing the freedom, although I tend to be a powerplayer.) Also more skills can be combined, see? (I even know what a skills synergy is :)) ).

There is noted "Yes, and" approcah while there should be also "Yes, but" and "No, and / but" according to the 2d6 (+ Job + Skill) rolling results.

There is nor PCs level uping!:( This lack of development is indeed downgrading the game as a TTRPG.

There is meantioned that the stories can change somenting and that PCs can get money, but there are no rules for either of that features nor for the city development :(.


Excuse me please, but in this state of the game, I am not open to playtest it. 

Rating: 2/5

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You put a rating on a free playtest? There are way more beneficial ways to communicate critique.

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If something is in a jam, then the something is asking to be rated, right?


If I would be the author, I would say: "Thank you for your detailed CONSTRUCTIVE critique. I will enhance it, especially according what you so smartly pointed out."


Feel free to respectfully rate all my games including what I published under DMDU in DriveThruRPG.

I hate to be that guy but u/captchasarerobots is not the author.

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I knew that he is not the author but it did not had any influence to my answer for him.

Feel free to rate and comment all my games including what I have under DMDU in DriveThruRPG. 

By the way, try the TTRPG "Raven", because according to your avatar, you should like that horror ravens-related TTRPG. 

My Lady Partner, whose main part of her personality is like relational, respectable, realistical Raven, is sending you her greeting. 

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This is fantastic design. I LOVE how succeeding with a flourish affects your next roll, and the fact that shocks don't level up, but Para does. And scoops are such a succinct and effective tool for the editor to structure a session around.